It's harsh, isn't? (closed)

A loner tiny tom kit who looks like a tiger, with blue eyes named Striped was walking trough the meadow, the kit don't even know where he was, he was lost, this cat was just there because he felt the smell of mouse, but at the same time, he saw somethings that he don't even know what is, these things make Striped curious, these things are called ''herbs'' by the wild cats in the forest.He was kinda annoyed by the tall grass because a tiny kit like him can't see anything, until he look at a flower, a flower with white petals and a round yellow thing in the center of the petals, with a thick leaf, also, those leaves are dark green and are oval, he walked to the plant and, with his tiny paws, the kitten rip out the flower and started to bite, more and more, while he was biting, he lay down, with the flower touching your paws, he stayed with his belly up while he was playing, Striped felt happy, but, the tom felt hungry, he stopped to play with the flower because he remembered of how the life was good when he lived with his family, he stayed with his belly up while he was lying down, Striped was kinda sad but, he don't cried, the tom got up and tried to found a mouse, but the mouse that he found ran away, kits like him are too weak for this, the tom became tired and sleeped right there.

Krios had decided to take a detour in the meadow and came across Striped lying in the middle of it. 'Poor thing' Krios thought noticing that the kit was too young to hunt and was clearly lost. He looked from side to side and opened his mouth searching for the scent of mouse. Krios found a scent and turned in that direction. He snuck through the grass his eyes gleaming. Krios pounced on the mouse and with a blow from his paw broke the mouse's neck. He too was hungry but shut the urge up as he dropped the mouse next to the kit and left.

Striped woke up a little time when Krios leave the mouse, he looked at the mouse and wonder,''who give the mouse to me? And why exactly the cat come to this place?'' He eat the mouse and got up, the kit felt the smell of Krios, and started to follow the rougue by the smell because he was curious.

At the other side of the meadow sat Krios looking up at the sky. His tail twitched as he caught the scent of the kit. He stayed looking at the sky, his shyness kicking in. Krios swept his tail around to his forepaws. Another mouse lay at his paws, partially eaten.

Striped approached to the tom and, with his high pitched voice, asked:''hey, can you tell me your name?'' when he approached to the tom, his nose flared, it's not like the smell of the kittypets who he lived with, he thinks that his scent is not a scent from a warrior, because his scent remember the city.He brushed his tail, with a gently breeze touching his fur.

"Krios." Krios answered as he turned to face the kit feeling quite glad he didn't stutter. He stretched with a yawn. "What's yours kit?" He almost stuttered, but somehow didn't. Krios was hoping to whoever decided fate to not let the kit compliment him because Krios knew what would happen. He shifted his weight from paw to paw like he was trying to get comfortable, when it !was just his shyness.

Striped didn't notice that he was a shy tom, he gave a response calmly: ''I'm Striped, nice to meet you'', the kit gave a him a naive smile while his face was turned to him, Striped asked to the tom: ''Are you a clan cat?'' while he was seated near the tom.

"Nice t-to meet you too... I'm not a Clan c-cat, I'm w-what they call a r-rouge." Krios replied almost cursing when he stuttered. He licked the mark on his shoulder out of habit, some of his shell cracking as a small smile creeped its way onto his face. Krios was hoping no Clan cats came by. He didn't want to get into a fight with Striped nearby. "H-hey, why don't you join me for a bit kit? I-I know a place that h-has plenty of f-food near here." He asked giving up on trying not to stutter.

With a naive smile again, Striped replied Krios: ''Sounds great! Where are this place?''Striped was acting calm because he thinked that the tom don't wanted to scare him and that why he was nervous, but when the kit hear Krios stamming, he knew that he was just a shy cat, he thinked that he can be a good rougue, not like what his mother told about rogues.

"It's back in twoleg place. C-come on the suns starting to lower." Krios replied standing up and heading in the direction of the border between this territory and the rogue and loner territory. He paused turned back and finished the mouse. 'This may take longer than expected, we may have to sleep out.' He thought as he walked towards the edge of the meadow. Krios stopped and turned to see if Striped was following

Striped was following Krios and while he was walking, he felt happy, it seems that some new adventures will came to him in this forest, Striped did not feel afraid, he was just anxious for what the future will reveal for him, the head of the kit turned to Krios while he was walking, but then, the tall grass was disturbing his vision, but, the tiny tom still can see Krios.